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Novellas of the Night

Part One

Posted on 2012.11.05 at 01:54

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(Anonymous) at 2012-11-06 03:17 (UTC) (Link)

TIS I

any who, i <3 all the daryl lol ..hm my only criticisms would be maybe go into why he is concerned that maggie is going with him a bit more, i was a little unclear on why. also even though he is all angsty daryl's language seems a bit less redneck southern badass than usual, but i did like how you threw in some of his key phrases.Perhaps make the flash back sequence stand out a tad more, or maybe a little longer so it doesn't blend in quite so much but that is just nit picking i <3 all of this and such
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